Try this site called The muse it gives guidelines for editing writing
It's important to use the literary elements/devices in the book like how it describes someone's appearance by using a metaphor, simile, and personification. you can tell how one feels by how they say things like if they yelled it, it would mean they are angry in that part. in an action of a drama the sounds like a boom, paw, rattle etc. is helpful to think about while thinking of it. Imagery and detail is very helpful to use while picturing the action.
