Answer: In equal roles, men and women will establish more meaningful marriages.
Explanation:
Based on the excerpt, marriage should not be forced on people and people should be able to choose whomever they want.
According to the excerpt, since more equitable laws are forming the citizens, then marriage may become more sacred.
The central idea of the excerpt is that in equal roles, men and women will establish more meaningful marriages.
You need to include the graphic image
For the first red, you don't need an article before "relationship".
When you're saying "type of [word]", do not put any article before that word.
Example: "a type of device"
Not too sure about the "your back" parts. It could be your teacher does not like repition.
Also not too sure about "did". He probably wanted you to use the word "felt" instead of "did feel"
The first word of the last paragraph should be "in" not "at".
The red commas definitely do not need to be there.
Don't know why he marked "time to" and "to" red.
