I think its should Be "Never Talk to strangers, Nor,get in a stangers car" Just my opinion
He was curious on why they were there in the first place and thats when he met the boy.
There are quite a few English words that contain letters that are not suppose to be said including: debt and write. These left out letters can often tell us about the history and origin of the word and some places in the world has these which can tell us about who lived there at the time. This is called etymology.
Hope that this answer helped. ☺
And, what is the question you are asking? I don't really understand..
I think that a good thesis statement would help and creative hooks to keep the writer hoook and not get bored and keep reading the story. Also add transition words to connect ideas in the creative writting.
