Answer:
You should remove "gray and white", "away", "big", "green and blue", and "fancy". These are all unnecessary adjectives or adverbs that take away from the main idea.
Yes because you may have missed somethings in reading most of the time its not only what the surface means but underneath the actual words.
Hi, my name is Dragon. I am in 9th grade with an A- average. I have trouble making friends because I'm smart. I have a little brother and sister who are twins. Their names are Coral for the girl, and Wave for the boy. My parents are divorced. So spend all the time with my mom. In the summer I go to New York to visit my dad.
