The snowman sat upon a thin layer of ice, each of his snowy white spheres like a full moon, glimmering in the light. Next to him sat a little boy, his eyes a pool of admiration at what he created. He slides two thick wooly mittens over the snowman hands and wrapped a knitted scarf around his neck.
CRACK! The boy slips, the ice surface splintering like a spiders web. The boy evaluated his mistake, dread filling his child heart like a broken dam.
CRACK! The sound erupted from beneath his hands, his eyes scanned for a way to evacuate, a way to safely deliver himself from the deadly grasp of the world beneath the ice.
Splash! His body submerged into the water, shock dulling his senses and paralyzing all movement. He looks to the surface a new layer of ice already forming. His body falls slowly, deeper and deeper like sand in an hourglass.
THUMP! THUMP! His heart beat against his chest as if to escape, but there was no escape, only the welcoming touch of eternal cold.
C. the tulips were bright slashes of color like a child's creation drawing
At the end everything solves out basically all the resolution
You could rewrite it a multitude of differing ways, but I’ll resort to not changing or adding a single word.
I have a dog, its name is Labrador. He is black in color. He wags his tail and licks my face when he is happy. I tell him, “Come, Labrador!” Sometimes he screams at me, “Gwaau!” He loves going for walks and chasing a red ball. I take him to school sometimes. Once he sees a black cat he wants to chase it, but I don’t let him. He is mad at me. I don’t know, but I hope he isn’t. I love my dog very much because he always obeys me and follows me everywhere.
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