Unclear, confusing. Because the last half doesn't make sense
Answer:
I think answer is from sounding like a beginner because in every success there is a first beginning of that things no one is born talent and have to work as a beginner to get success
Keep It Short And To The Point.
Make It Clear, Concise, And Logical.
Focus On The Recipient's Needs.
Use Simple And Appropriate Language.
Use Short Sentences And Paragraphs.
Review And Revise It.
Double check spelling and grammar.
