Hey i don’t play animal crossing but i was wondering if it’s a cool game?
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sexual intercourse between people not married to each other.
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The correct answer is D. It is not a strong example of paraphrasing. It just rearranges the original words in a new order.
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In writing, paraphrasing implies using the ideas of an external source and author and expressing them by using your own words, because of this a strong paraphrasing would change the language used but keep the essence and main points of the original ideas. In the excerpt presented, the author tried to paraphrase a passage that describes cone snails. However, in the passage paraphrased the author uses the same terms and words than in the original passage which means he or she is not expressing the ideas of the original passage with his or her own words but only changing the order of ideas the text and therefore this is not a strong paraphrasing and can even be considered a plagiarism as the same words and ideas are being used. Therefore, this text can be described as "It is not a strong example of paraphrasing. It just rearranges the original words in a new order".
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"no error".
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The comma is correctly placed before the conjunction "for"; and in this instance in which the word, "for", is used, a comma is necessary. No other part of the sentence needs—or requires—a comma, and there are no commas that are placed unnecessarily.
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As a side note, I would recommend that the first letter of the first word in the sentence: "Abbey", be capitalized, because:
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1) It is the first word at the beginning of the sentence; and:
2) It is someone's name, which is a proper noun.
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I also recommend placing a "period" at the end of the sentence.
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To read:
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<span>Abbey is most interested in learning how to mount her horse, for she already knows several things about dressage.
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