When you site your evidence, make sure to quote it and say what number paragraph it came from
Becki put 224 stamps on her stamp collection book
14 on each page, and filled 16 pages (14 x 16)
Make your opener as personal as possible. ...
Tell them about yourself. ...
Point out the home's attributes. ...
Find a connection. ...
Explain your bid, even if it's low. ...
Close with lots of thanks.
It heightens the sense of loss