<em>Minutes</em><em> </em><em>that</em><em> </em><em>Matter</em><em> </em>and <em>Defeating</em><em> </em><em>Dragons</em> are working for the same common goal: helping others. Both articles describe groups helping people constantly, consistently, and not asking for money in return, selflessly. Both groups also sacrifice their time and energy towards helping people, because they value everyone's life and happiness.
I included these revisions to add clarity to my writing, correct grammatical errors, and reduce run on sentences. Additionally, I reduced redundancy in the first paragraph.
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When you're finished with them and compare with other students or your teacher.
Better early than late.
