The word "utopian" must be changed to the word "perfect." Also, the word "monopolio" must be changed to the expression "full control."
Explanation:
In order for a text to be appropriate and understood by the general public, the author of the text must use common and popular words and expressions, which can be easily understood by anyone, regardless of education level, age, profession and region. In the case of the text shown in the question above, the words "utopian" and "monopoly" may be unfamiliar to some people and therefore should be changed to make the text more effective and understandable by the general population.