It happened in "The Fall of the House of Usher" (by Edgar Allan Poe) that while Usher and the narrator speaks, Usher's sister walks through the room, apparently unaware of the narrator. The narrator's reaction to seeing Usher's sister when he sees her pass through the room was with an utter astonishment not unmingled with dread.
Answer:
Looks almost good.
Explanation:
Only thing I see, "I'm doing fine," the quotation mark is spaced from it on yours.
Looks amazing so far. Hope you do good!
