1answer.
Ask question
Login Signup
Ask question
All categories
  • English
  • Mathematics
  • Social Studies
  • Business
  • History
  • Health
  • Geography
  • Biology
  • Physics
  • Chemistry
  • Computers and Technology
  • Arts
  • World Languages
  • Spanish
  • French
  • German
  • Advanced Placement (AP)
  • SAT
  • Medicine
  • Law
  • Engineering
joja [24]
3 years ago
9

Hello Helloooo, I'm not English, I'm French, so can somebody correct my faults (short txt) and sure make better it please ? the

subject is "shopping addiction", and I will do a vocal but first it should be correct,right ?
Thankssss
Hello, I'm Inci and today, I'm going to tell you more about my shopping habits. First, I shop with my mom most of the time and sometimes alone. Next, I can go shopping at any time free, there is no specific day to have fun! Because shopping is fun. After that, sure I need sometimes some items such as school supplies, books. Yet I accept, I usually buy items lots of things even if they don't match my needs, just because I like and I want, so I buy: clothes, but even more bags, accessories, especially earrings when I already have plenty of them.
What is more, I won't grow taller, so I can't lie about the clothes or the shoes. I admit I like shopping.
Besides, I have a tendency to art. I collect wonderful things: pieces that date back to centuries, Alsatian newspapers from the beginning of the 20th century, postcards from all over the world ... Recently I paid dearly for an authentic painting from the 20th century. Well, it's my father who pays, but that's what I'm very attracted to by this kind of thing and I spend a lot of it.
Furthermore, on average I can say that I can spend 200 euros per week ...
Eventually you might think I’m a shopaholic but I often sort my stuff, I donate clothes. Besides, I give gifts of my paintings and my statuettes… and I buy a lot of eco conception clothes, I like to join the good of our planet.
To conclude, I can be a sparing shopaholic!
English
1 answer:
hichkok12 [17]3 years ago
6 0

Hello, I'm Inci and today, I'm going to tell you more about my shopping habits. First, I shop alone but most of the time I am with my mom. Next, I can go shopping at any time that I'm free; there is no specific day to have fun! Because shopping is fun for me. Sometimes I shop for school items like books and school supplies. Yet I usually buy items that I don't really need, just because I like or want it So I buy: clothes and many bags, accessories- especially earrings even though I already have plenty of them.

What is more, I won't grow taller, so I can buy as much clothes or shoes because they will always fit. I admit it, I like shopping.

Besides, I have a tendency to collect art. I collect wonderful things: pieces that date back centuries; Alsatian newspapers from the beginning of the 20th century; postcards from all over the world. Recently I paid a good amount for an authentic painting from the 20th century. Well, it's my father who pays, but that's what I love about shopping. I love money and I spend a lot of it.

Furthermore, on average I can say that I spend around 200 euros per week.

Eventually you might think I’m a shopaholic, but I often sort my stuff. I even donate clothes and give gift many paintings and statuettes from my collection. Plus, most of what I buy is eco conception clothes; I like to join the good of our planet.

To conclude, I can be a sparing shopaholic!

I hope this works! there wasn't much wrong but it was a bit wordy and didn't flow very well ><

I hope I helped and good luck on your presentation ^^

You might be interested in
"It was then that Diana Moon Glampers, the Handicapper General, came into the studio with a double-barreled ten-gauge shotgun. S
8_murik_8 [283]

Vonnegut used television to reinforce a theme within the text, because: By broadcasting the deaths of Harrison and the ballerina, television is used to ensure conformity and control the citizens. This shows the dangers of "total equality" as violence is used to ensure equality.

<h3>What is the theme of Harrison Bergeron?</h3>

"Harrison Bergeron," which was written by Kurt Vonnegut showed an American society where citizens were made to conform to the dictates of society. Harrison rebelled and danced at a televised program.

He was, however, killed by Diana and this was seen by the viewers. The broadcast of the death shows that rebellion will not be tolerated. This will instill fear in the viewers.

Learn more about Harrison Bergeron here:

brainly.com/question/11433020

4 0
2 years ago
The personal protective equipment used when operating the rear tine roto-tiller includes:
hodyreva [135]

Answer:

D) All of the above

Explanation:

5 0
3 years ago
Complete your CAP file carefully. It contains most of the information you need to finish your assessment! Choose a state or loca
andrey2020 [161]
Use powerful stats to make kids stop and think

For example nearly half the world's population lives on less than $2 a day and 0.5% of the world's population holds more than a third of the world wealth. The UN has a good site with statistics on different issues. Another great website looking at development numbers is Gapminder.

Use assembly time to reflect on the world around you

Assembly is a great opportunity to get kids reflecting on the world around them, and there are a huge range of resources are available. Christian Aid does an assembly of the month and Oxfam produces something every half-term.

Use the news as a platform to discuss key issues

For example, talk about democracy with the US election, or use hurricane Sandy to talk about development, disasters and climate change, everyone saw the impact in New York, but what about places such as Haiti?

Food is an issue kids can connect to easily

Food is now a critical global issue, after decades of improvements globally hunger is now increasing and one in eight people don't have enough to eat. This is an issue kids can connect to easily. You can find a range of resources, for example Oxfam's Food for Thought resource and organisations like<span> Action Aid has good resources too</span>. Find a variety of resources on food and hunger on the Guardian Teacher Network, collated here.

Learn about the Millennium Development Goals

These are eight global poverty reduction goals agreed in 2000 to be achieved by 2015, with three years left. The prime minister was recently at a meeting in Paris to discuss what we do in 2015 – some successes but many challenges and a great opportunity for debate. Here are colourful photos from around the world illustrating the eight Millennium Development Goals from the charity Practical Action and from the UN Photo Library.

Start with human rights

The 1948 UN Declaration of Human Rights (UDHR) is a commitment to everyone sharing a set of basic fundamental rights, and kids understand this. You can bring a range of issues back to it - for example 67 million kids are denied the right to education every year - a rich topic to discuss. You can bring this to life use with a (very popular) school-based campaign called Send my Friend to School or see UNICEFs Rights Respecting Schools Award. See also these resources from Amnesty which explore human rights as a preparation for entering the Young Human Rights Reporter competition 2013 including this neat summary of the UDHR. Global inequality and self-sufficient education are explored in this resource by the charity Teach a Man to Fish.

Challenge perceptions about the world

A good starting point is Miniature Earth which represents the earth if it were a village of 100 people. Maps are also useful, for example the Guardian's climate change maps, or Oxfam's resource about map projections.

Get pupils thinking about power structures. For example with the global food system, four companies control over three quarters of global grain trade. Find out more about them in this article and this lovely infographic illustrates the degree of monopolisation in the food system. A good tool is the development compass rose which prompts thinking about the political, social, economic and environmental aspect of any issue.

Use a learn-think-act process

Don't stop at the learning, but get pupils thinking about their how to do something as responsible global citizens. This can include raising awareness locally, contacting their MPs, or changing their shopping habits. For more information on global citizenship see this page or Get Global, a great resource pack for teachers.

Use the Global Dimension as a guide

This was developed by the Department for Education as a<span> guide to thinking about global issues with your pupils</span>, it has eight key concepts which can help to guide and organise learning.

Lastly don't reinvent the wheel

There are resources already there. Look at sites like Oxfam's, but also the Global Dimension website – a central clearing house for global learning resources.


8 0
3 years ago
Read 2 more answers
Where do you go first to find an adverb?
luda_lava [24]
The middle of the sentence or after it states what's happing in the story your reading
8 0
3 years ago
Read 2 more answers
In the first paragraph, which line states a reason why humans are at fault for the lionfish problem?
Viefleur [7K]

Hey There!!

The answer to this is: When reading this, we saw how this lion fish was put into the Atlantic, and therefore, there's actually one thing that is actually something that we would want to consider, and that would actually indicate that it would be our answer.

Let's take notice in the paragraph on how the following sentence shows that this would be a total accident, and that this animal was putted in this location not by purpose, but by accident, and therefore, this was the actual lead on why humans are at fault for the lion fish problem.

The lionfish was accidentally introduced into the Atlantic Ocean in the 1990s.

This would be your answer, and this would be why it would be that they have adapted very quickly to their homes and all the they have now have.

Your answer: The lionfish was accidentally introduced into the Atlantic Ocean in the 1990s.

Hope It Helped!~ ♡

ItsNobody~ ☆

4 0
3 years ago
Other questions:
  • The most important word in the complete subject
    7·1 answer
  • What is the author’s viewpoint about the Embrenche?
    6·2 answers
  • Who are the main characters of "No more dead dogs?"
    10·2 answers
  • How does the imagery in Stanza 2 impact the mood of the poem?
    13·1 answer
  • *20 points* PART A: What does the possibility of losing their home reveal about Maud Martha
    14·1 answer
  • Click to read the passage from "The Yellow Wallpaper," by Charlotte Perkins
    5·1 answer
  • Choosing the most effective revision for the sentence. If no revision is necessary, choose "Leave it as is."
    15·1 answer
  • Can someone write me a short story about why you shouldn't bully people &lt;3​
    14·1 answer
  • Which of the following statements is true about a story's narrator?
    14·2 answers
  • What meaning is emphasized by the use of the words merciful and mercy in the passage?.
    14·1 answer
Add answer
Login
Not registered? Fast signup
Signup
Login Signup
Ask question!