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joja [24]
3 years ago
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Hello Helloooo, I'm not English, I'm French, so can somebody correct my faults (short txt) and sure make better it please ? the

subject is "shopping addiction", and I will do a vocal but first it should be correct,right ?
Thankssss
Hello, I'm Inci and today, I'm going to tell you more about my shopping habits. First, I shop with my mom most of the time and sometimes alone. Next, I can go shopping at any time free, there is no specific day to have fun! Because shopping is fun. After that, sure I need sometimes some items such as school supplies, books. Yet I accept, I usually buy items lots of things even if they don't match my needs, just because I like and I want, so I buy: clothes, but even more bags, accessories, especially earrings when I already have plenty of them.
What is more, I won't grow taller, so I can't lie about the clothes or the shoes. I admit I like shopping.
Besides, I have a tendency to art. I collect wonderful things: pieces that date back to centuries, Alsatian newspapers from the beginning of the 20th century, postcards from all over the world ... Recently I paid dearly for an authentic painting from the 20th century. Well, it's my father who pays, but that's what I'm very attracted to by this kind of thing and I spend a lot of it.
Furthermore, on average I can say that I can spend 200 euros per week ...
Eventually you might think I’m a shopaholic but I often sort my stuff, I donate clothes. Besides, I give gifts of my paintings and my statuettes… and I buy a lot of eco conception clothes, I like to join the good of our planet.
To conclude, I can be a sparing shopaholic!
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hichkok12 [17]3 years ago
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Hello, I'm Inci and today, I'm going to tell you more about my shopping habits. First, I shop alone but most of the time I am with my mom. Next, I can go shopping at any time that I'm free; there is no specific day to have fun! Because shopping is fun for me. Sometimes I shop for school items like books and school supplies. Yet I usually buy items that I don't really need, just because I like or want it So I buy: clothes and many bags, accessories- especially earrings even though I already have plenty of them.

What is more, I won't grow taller, so I can buy as much clothes or shoes because they will always fit. I admit it, I like shopping.

Besides, I have a tendency to collect art. I collect wonderful things: pieces that date back centuries; Alsatian newspapers from the beginning of the 20th century; postcards from all over the world. Recently I paid a good amount for an authentic painting from the 20th century. Well, it's my father who pays, but that's what I love about shopping. I love money and I spend a lot of it.

Furthermore, on average I can say that I spend around 200 euros per week.

Eventually you might think I’m a shopaholic, but I often sort my stuff. I even donate clothes and give gift many paintings and statuettes from my collection. Plus, most of what I buy is eco conception clothes; I like to join the good of our planet.

To conclude, I can be a sparing shopaholic!

I hope this works! there wasn't much wrong but it was a bit wordy and didn't flow very well ><

I hope I helped and good luck on your presentation ^^

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