Answer:
Even though this question is missing the options, after analyzing the revision we can safely say it was made for <u>conciseness</u>.
Explanation:
Conciseness can be simply defined as saying a lot in just a few words. Notice how the original paragraph is much longer than the revised one. The writer gave much more information than what was truly necessary. Details such as "and that new procedures need to be initiated" and "who was sympathetic" are superfluous. The first one adds nothing of value. If the procedures are inadequate, it is quite obvious that new ones need to be initiated. Readers could infer that. The second one is permeated with subjectivity, not only making the paragraph longer, but also stating an opinion that in uncalled for in this context. By eliminating the extra words, the writer made the paragraph concise, using fewer words to express the necessary.
Answer:
part-to-whole relationship: tail:mouse / scale:crocodile
item-category relationship: Monday:weekday / Saturday:weekend
cause-and-effect relationship: cut:bleed / burn:irritate
Explanation:
In an analogy, we find a relationship between different things, something that connects them. Let's analyze the analogies above.
- A mouse is a whole that can be divided into several parts: ears, tails, paws, etc. The same goes for a crocodile: teeth, scales, stomach. Thus, with tail:mouse and scale:crocodile, we have a relationship of part to whole.
- There are different days in a week: Sunday, Monday, Tuesday, etc. Those days can be divided under different categories. Monday, for instance, can be categorized as a weekday. However, Saturday would be categorized under weekend since it is not a weekday. Thus, with Monday:weekday and Saturday:weekend, we have an item-category relationship.
- Finally, if you cut yourself, you will most likely bleed. Bleeding is the effect of being cut. Cutting is the cause of bleeding. The same goes for getting burned (cause) and the skin getting irritated (effect). Thus, with cut:bleed and burn:irritate, the relationship is of cause and effect.
B. direct: satellites; indirect: space
Answer:The pledge of allegiance is impor to stand for it beca if you live in America you are honoring your country
Explanation:
Answer:
Part A: Both works detail a scene of chaos and tragedy.
Part B: Th soldiers lined up between the Stste Housr and King Street, facing the townspeople.
Explanation:
Part A:
Both the passage and the image present a part in which the soldiers kill two members of the town . The passage describes the lining of the soldiers with their guns directed to the townsfolk, waiting for the command to fire (left side of the image) and the townsfolk in revolt and being shot without being armed (right side of the image). The scene is delirious and people's lives have been lost. This is the description in both works.
Part B:
The text describes the setting of the characters as two groups of people (i.e., the soldiers and the townsmen) facing each other. The image indicates this form of lining up clearly. The soldiers and the townsmen are grouped together and they face each other. The State House and the King Street are also presented.