The writer will add the following paragraph to her letter. I was in a club that built toys that use energy from the sun. We gave
the toys away to children when we were done. Also, my science-fair project was about ways to change trash into energy. It received first prize in the state. The judges said that I should share my work with a power company. I would be happy to do that.. Which detail should be removed from the paragraph? Click to view the business letter. A. The judges said that I should share my work with a power company. O
B. I was in a club that built toys that use energy from the sun.
C. We gave the toys away to children when we were done.
D. My science-fair project was about ways to change trash into
C. We gave the toys away to children when we were done.
Explanation:
According to the given excerpt, a student wrote a letter searching for internship at a Power Station and attached to the letter was a paragraph that listed her achievements which showed her competency and reliability.
However, the detail that should be removed from the paragraph is the detail about giving away toys to children when they were done with their experiment.. This is because, this is not related to her search for internship and as a result is unnecessary.
I think the most helpful way to create a more formal and professional tone is to eliminate the informal language.
Explanation:
The paragraph has phrases like "<em>off the hook</em>", or homeless "<em>peeps</em>" that are not accurate for a formal request. If those words or phrases are changed for more formal ones, the whole request will sound more serious and important.
A flashback tells something from the past so the answer would have to be (A) this is because of the use of the word recall. In every other option the verb is present or future tense instead of past tense.