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I love going to the zoo with my dad. Many of the animals are cool and we like looking at animals especially lions. <u>because</u> (lions are big and strong and strong animals are scary) (Change : They are tough and ferocious, which makes them scary)<u> </u><u>in real life</u> but when they are in a cage it isn't so bad. <u>but</u> I would never want to be put in a cage because I would get sad. <u>so</u> (I don't know if the animals are happy or sad but) (change : Uncertain if the animals will feel happy or sad themselves) my dad (says)(change : said) that the animals at the zoo are very well taken care of and i shouldn't worry about them.
Explanation:
I added brackets to the parts where i changed the sentenced, underlined the parts I would cross out and bold the periods.
Where it says change : don't add that in the sentence.
The animation "Moana" presents a captivating and inspiring story, as it presents a brave and gentle girl, who to prevent her people from going through needs embarks on a great adventure, full of dangers and uncertainties. Despite the problems that Moana faces, she does not shy away from her responsibilities and faces her own fears knowing that it will promote a wonderful result for her, her family and the people for whom she is responsible.
The correct answer is C. <span>The speaker in In Memoriam, A. H. H. is the poet, but the speaker in “The Lady of Shalott” lacks a specific identity.
"In Memoriam, A. H. H." is a very personal poem about the loss of Tennyson's dear friend. The speaker talks in the 1st person, thus providing the poem with a tone of deep, personal grief over the friend's premature death. The poem is rich with drama, as the speaker questions God's existence, Christian ethics, wonders and enigmas of nature...
On the other hand, the speaker in "The Lady of Shalott" is anonymous but, in a way, omniscient - as if he knows everything, all the secrets, intimate feelings of the mysterious Lady, magical spells that bind her.</span>
