Answer:
Gordon should revise sentence 1 to provide specific details about what "struck" him as he first entered the room.
Explanation: Read the paragraph from Gordon's personal narrative.
1 When I first entered the room, I was really struck by what I saw. 2 It was my first day of cooking lessons, and I was on my way to fulfilling my dreams of one day becoming a chef in my own world-renowned restaurant. 3 I had spent countless hours of my childhood watching my parents, both professional chefs, prepare savory meals for my sisters and me. 4: From them, I had already obtained a solid foundation of cooking basics. 5 : However, it was in this room that I would build upon those basics and begin my ascent as a chef in my own right.
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In The Crucible<span> Abigail accused people of being witches with no proof, and the court blindly believed her statements, taking them as facts. Life experiences such as living through the hysteria regarding Communism and being wrongfully accused of Contempt of congress prompted Arthur Miller to write The </span><span>Crucible.</span>
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but at a minimum, you need a character(s), a setting, a problem/ conflict, a climax, and a resolution.
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