If I like it: Yes, I like this poem. It seems/feels so intimate, yet somehow I feel connected to the character.
What emotions are there:I believe the emotions a reader would feel would be sorrow, pity, despair, grief, and helplessness because he/she has no power to help the abused.
What I would add to make it better: I probably wouldn't, perhaps start posting it publicly to sites like 'Wattpad', to get a wider perspective from public comments.
Il is the prefix and legal is the root word because illegal means not legal.
B seems accurate to me. None of the other options read as grammatically correct.
the articles lacked an outline for a tax system that would pay debts
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