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The president, US Consitution. The goverment have power, but it tends to corrupt them. It's in Washingtion D.C. Legislative create the laws, as the executive branch carries out the laws
Answer:
In sentence D, change "it" to "the bridge."
Explanation:
In the sentence D, ''it'' should be changed to ''to bridge'' because of the previous sentence in which he said that his brothers had caught an extremly big fish. Because of the previous sentence, he should change it to ''the bridge'' because the readers can think that they have stayed on the big fish that they caught which would be absurd, and in that way, this paragraph would make no sense.
The other usage of ''They'' and ''My brothers'' is good because it is balanced in the paragraph. In every second sentence he is using ''They'' and after that ''My brothers'' so the readers have a good perception of his thoughts.
<span>The mechanics and organization are good, but sentences 1 and 3 should be edited to achieve a formal style and objective tone.
The sentences in the passage do not have errors in grammar or punctuation, so any of these options can be immediately removed. Ending the first sentence with the word "cool" and using "that's for sure" and "you" in the last sentence, give the passage a much more informal tone. These sentences should be revised for a more formal tone to have a stronger concluding paragraph.
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