Answer:
I think for starters its pretty good.
Explanation:
If you write more, I would love to read if you add on to this. Would love to see where thia goes!
The verb in this sentence is in the passive voice.
Part one:
2) "I want to go to bed."
3) "We'll be arriving at six o'clock."
4) "I don't like cheese."
5) "I went to Italy in 2009."
6) "I am reading a book."
7) "We received a lot of good advice."
8) "I am not going to do the washing-up."
part two:
2) was
3) are appealing
4) was going to search
5) were launching
6) made
7) thought, was
I believe these are correct!
Answer: Yes, it just needs more body!
Explanation: I like the plot line, if you add more excitement to the story via adventures then I’d say you have a nice book going!
Answer: support his wife and three children
