I feel as though famous could be taken out because its just a describing word, And just there to add detail to the sentence.
Sorry if I'm wrong, really hope this helps!
-Rylee
A very <em>interesting </em>way to state that the character has bloomed/matured/grown. It's visible this character has grown physically/emotionally/mentally. And the author wants you to see that.
While respecting excellence it’s not enough to know everything or have all the knowledge in the world. Even so, with what knowledge we have we should use it.
