The story is going to be written in first person point of view
C. "While you finish your chores," said my older brother, "I will help fix your video game."
There there needs to be the comma inside of the quotation marks at the end of the sentence, yet the comma outside of the quotation marks when it is at the beginning of the phrase. There should also be quotation marks in front of the next quotation.
I believe the answer is A
Hmmm... Either A or D, but I'm not sure. I know for a fact that B and C are her motives, but A and D are quite similar
They needed to "draw level" with the others.