Answer:
option B. The best critique to explain why Henrique should revise the paragraph is that he needs to add some descriptive language to make the story come alive. In literature a commonly used device is the one of descriptive language. Basically, descriptive language is used to create a picture of the scene/character in the reader's mind. Henrique's story is laying the order of events in a logical order but it is lacking the descriptive language that will give details to those events, making the reader to engage with the story line.
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Explanation:
Answer:
The answer to your question would be that the version of the sentence that uses the preposition to show location is the following one: The unexpected blackout occurred near the masquerade ball.
Explanation:
The preposition showing location in the sentence above is <em>near.</em> This preposition means "not far away in distance". All the other versions of the sentence use the prepositions to give information as regards the time in which the event being referred to took place (before, during, and after).
The simpler version of the given sentence is:
b. He found
his neighbor attractive.
The given sentence is
too wordy and some words can be eliminated without altering the meaning and
thought of the sentence. The answer is an improved version of the given
sentence because it is concise.
The coordinating conjunction is "yet"
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Answer: D
Explanation:
He knew that gold was not real and that it was an illusion that showed that people would fall for easy wealth.
