The first one is better in my opinion
This happened to me a few years ago when I was on holiday in Meia Praia, a small town near the beach in Brazil.
My boyfriend and I wanted to go walking through the forest because it was a wonderful sunny day. We started walking early in the morning. While we were walking we listened to a strange sound several times, but we didn´t care about it. As we were nearer the beach which was on the coast of the Island, that sound was stronger. In the middle of our way to the beach, a couple warned us about the wild monkeys which live there, but we didn´t care about it, neither.
When we were just some meters from the beach, we felt that noise behind us and at the same time a big monkey appeared in front of us. It was a harmless animal which made a strong noise because it was afraid of people. Unfortunately, we didn´t know that these species lived there and we could have made him to get annoy.
Since then, we learned to pay attention to the signs of nature.
Simile, because no part in the poem does it say anything is “like” or “as”another thing :) hope that helped
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