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Explanation:
1. In 2003, Aron Ralston went hiking alone in a canyon in Utah. He trapped his arm under a rock and couldn't move. He had his phone on him and was able to call for help. Ralston Survived.
2. In 1996, Pete Goss was leading a round-the-world yacht race. During a terrible storm, he got an emergancy call. Another competitior, Rafael Dinelli, was in trouble and Goss's boat was the only one in the area. Goss turned back and was able to save Dinelli's life and was able to get back fast enough to win the race.
3. In 1972, the pilot of a plane carrying an Uruguayan rugby team miscalculated his postition and crashed 3,600 metres and ended up in the Andes. The plane was white, but was luckily able to be spotted. There was many injured and 5 died.
There are people who watch the fire everyday they have meetings regularly and Jack is always out hunting. The littluns sleep play and eat. When they awaken more towards noon the water rises and things that aren't rlly there seem to be.
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1. By changing, deleting, and adding information to make a sentence or paragraph more complete.
2. Reorganising paragraphs logically to ensure unity and coherence in the essay.
Explanation:1. This eliminates all forms of tautology and makes the text more clearer and meaningful.
2. By doing this one ensures that each paragraph is related to the other, and that there is a connection between sentences in a paragraph.
Judging by the use of Adam in the text, it is more clear to understand that this texts theme is creation.
