Nick- Well I suppose I've done a lot of different things in my life.
Tom- How many countries have you visited?
Nick- Oh, I don't know exactly, but I visited all the continents including Antarctica.
I traveled there with a group of scientists a few years ago and we spent three months there.
Tom- And I understand you had a number of different jobs over the years?
Nick- Yes, I worked in a lot of places and I've done some strange things. I drove a London bus. I've been down a gold mine in South Africa, I performed in a circus.
Tom- A circus? What haven't you done? I've been a lion tamer's assistant!
I taught English in Russia and ten years ago I had my own travel agency. And last year I wrote my first novel.
The bold are Tom and Nick. The bold words are the ones used to fill in the blanks.
Brainliest please! :)
Answer:
Cheyanne, the girl with long, thick, black hair, was forever seen as very clever and intuitive for solving the strange, haunting mystery of the horrible murder of Mrs. Mila Quintero, who was age 67 and a terribly lonesome widow when she was poisoned while at feast that her mother, an old, wrinkly, yet lively woman, had worked on preparing for weeks.
Explanation:
1. This sentence is way too long. It goes on and on.
2. Too many adjectives!
3. Typically when describing something in a singular sentence, if you want to go in depth for detail, you need to stick with one or possibly even two subjects. Otherwise there is an overload of information.
4. Stuffing this much detail until a singular sentence confuses and bores the reader.
5. Some of this information is unnecessary. Just because you have a subject or noun, you don't have to add an appositive.
is it Sokuhi Shigan? i am not sure if this is the anime that you are looking for
