The error in this sentence is a A) pronoun-antecedent voice agreement error. But it should be noted that this has become more standard usage in common dialogue.
Answer:
Love it!
Explanation:
Includes subtle biblical references within your poem.
Concise yet deep.
The only inconsistent part is the first stanza - it is the only section with any variation of "you" in it, which is totally fine but it stands out a little.
Other than that, I think it's great :)
Nope, it will never be like that