A lot of descriptive imagery, excellent setting and sophisticated language. Use of punctuation is varied and concise which effectively engages the readers to continue reading.
One problem is sentence length. No examiner wants to mark your exam and immediately get hit in the face with a chunk of words. Separate your paragraphs individually.
Team since a singer is a part of a band therefore a goalie is a part of a team
<span>Juliet is saying that her nurse wants her to go ahead and break her vows. The situation is confusing to her because the nurse is now saying bad things about Romeo after she has said so many good things about him. It is almost like she was encouraging her and now is discouraging her from being with him. She has decided that is best to no longer tell her secrets to the nurse. She is heading to go to the friar in order to get a potion that will kill her, if they cannot come up with a better solution. </span>
A business letter should use formal language
