Definitley A I mean who would put FOOD as a recurring motif
(besides all the others are true)
Answer:
Food is not cooked by her
Explanation:
Answer:
Try to be more descriptive. Change "deeper and deeper" to "The sun began to slowly sink further into the horizon as the night creeping"
Explanation:
I think that the overall idea of the description is good but I just feel like, maybe it could be worse more where you get a better sense of how it might look. kind of giving it that fancy but also story like touch to it to make it seem both real but that of a description coming from a detailed memory.
