The answer would be the first choice or A. "Original ideas that are <em>not</em> your own."
Any piece of information that does not belong to you would require a citation, otherwise it would be considered <em>plagiarism. </em>B and C are incorrect because both of those things belong to you, and therefore don't require citation. D is also incorrect because a general fact doesn't belong to any one person. For example, if you wanted to include the information that dogs can't eat chocolate, that wouldn't require a citation because that is general knowledge that most people are aware of.
Answer:
"In the years just after the Empire State Building was built, there were not enough renters to fill the building due to the Depression. However, there were plenty of visitors, both tourists and celebrities. They came to marvel at the building's height and go up to the observation tower. The Empire State Building quickly became a favorite place to visit in New York."
Explanation:
To paraphrase a text means using the same meaning as the text, but using different words. In other words, we can say that paraphrasing is the ability to repeat information from one text, in another text, using different words and phrases.
In this case, among the options given in the question above, only one of them reaches the meaning of paraphrase. This option is: "In the years just after the Empire State Building was built, there were not enough renters to fill the building due to the Depression. However, there were plenty of visitors, both tourists and celebrities. They came to marvel at the building's height and go up to the observation tower. The Empire State Building quickly became a favorite place to visit in New York."
-Are the words "Transition" and "Conclusion sentence" there because you used it as a guide, you are required to have them, or you need to put one in
-There was a little bit of a lot of word and sentence repeating, I feel like a different word choice could have been used, like synonyms. Like instead of knowledge being used 500 times, awareness or apprehension, understanding, or comprehension could have been used. Just look up synonyms of words you used a bunch of times or for bland (boring) words
- There is some punctuation that could be improved
- Flow is good, with a few choppy parts
- Other than those it is really good
-Let me know if you need anything else, I am more than happy to help
<span>I cannot imagine how high the skyscraper rises from this photograph.
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I believe the answer could be found in a file but 72737 sound correct hahaha
