Hello!
I don't find the paragraph to be too wordy at all. I don't understand the entire context of the paragraph, only because I don't know the topic that it is written on. Despite this, I was still able to follow the meaning of the paragraph.
Something that I did notice is that you have one run-on sentence in your paragraph. You wrote "The only thing they solved was why Hope was in that picture, she photobombed a family picture, they gave her the printed version because they deleted the original and didn't want her in it, she cut the family out and wrote on the back, 'Don't go to the subway.'"
Instead, you could reword it into multiple different sentences to make the idea complete. I would recommend you turn this section into: "The only thing they solved was why Hope was in that picture. She photobombed a family picture and they gave her the printed version because they deleted the original one and didn't want her in it. She cut the family out and wrote on the back, 'Don't go to the subway.'"
I hope this helps you! Have a lovely day!
- Mal
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Explanation:
a Japanese poem of seventeen syllables, in three lines of five, seven, and five, traditionally evoking images of the natural world
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Finn the Red–Handed had stolen a skillet and a quantity of half–cured leaf tobacco, and had also brought a few corn–cobs to make pipes with. But none of the pirates smoked or "chewed" but himself.
it would be a. I don't know right now...
A sentence fragment is an incomplete sentence that cannot stand by itself because there is a subject and/or a main verb missing. Unless they are used to convey a certain style, sentence fragments should be avoided because they are gramatically incorrect. <u>Examples of sentence fragments are "swam by the river" or "Throughout the novel, the author"</u>. On the other hand, a run-on sentence is a sentence that contains two or more independent clauses that have been connected in an improper way.<u> Examples of run-on sentences are "My sister is sick we are not going to the beach" "I studied for the test I arrived late"</u>.
