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Not bad, i'd say. just make sure you add transitional words/phrases so that it all makes sense, okay? other than that, i really love it, great job!
also, it does include logos, pathos, and ethos.
3. The third person point of view (the 'he' vs. 'I' in this passage) is voiced by an observer with limited omniscience.
In this case limited omniscience is shown by the fact that the narrator has feelings about what is occurring. An objective character would remain neutral describing events.
The insight teacher her nothing about herself as a writer
