Question

Rewrite the sentence below to make them more concise

Answer 1

Answer:

Your yesterday's inquiry of our Apple brand of phones is available.

Explanation:

I have been able to rewrite the given sentence in order to make it more concise.

From my concise sentence, it can be deduced that:

i. an inquiry was made yesterday

ii. the specific inquiry that was made was stated without leaving anyone in the dark.

iii. what is been inquired is available.

Concise sentences give a lot of information very clearly and they do that in  few words. Such sentences are very brief yet easy to be understood.