Start with an intriguing question. Like if you’re trying to sell a lavender infused pillowcase or something you could ask “Are you having trouble falling or staying asleep?” Like that.
The community center is good for everyone to do all kinds of fun things when they want. (wordy and unclear) This sentence uses too many words with clauses that confuse the reader. Another way to express the same could be: “The community center provides fun activities for everyone”
The proposed program will give every student in the county access to tutoring services. (clear and concise) This sentence is easily read since it does not use many words to express the main ideas.
Installing recycle bins at key points around the city will make recycling easier for our residents. (clear and concise) This sentence is easily read since it does not use many words to express the main ideas.
Many people have said there are not enough security guards at the mall, so the mall is unsafe and dangerous, and people don't want to shop there. (wordy and unclear) This sentence uses too many words with clauses that confuse the reader. Another way to express the same could be: “There aren’t enough security guards in the mall so people think it is dangerous and unsafe to shop there.”
Foreshadowing is when an author uses symbolism, an event, a small detail, or even a part of dialogue to be a warning or indication of a future event. An author might use this because they want to give the reader knowledge about a future event or to tease them.
