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Sophie [7]
3 years ago
15

Is this good? i need constructive criticism

English
1 answer:
astra-53 [7]3 years ago
8 0

I really like this piece. I enjoyed reading it and your word choice was excellent. There was an eloquent flow between lines, also. The only change I'd make would be the final line. Ending poetry can be difficult, of course. However, the final line is leaving me a little unsatisfied. I'd play around with it some more until you find something that sounds a little better.

Amazing job!!!!!

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