Hi I think you did a pretty good job on this, but as you know nothing is perfect!
I would recommend adding more transitions, ending it with something more special, use more advanced words than the basic ones, more parallelism and have a better intro but overall I think it's very lovely.
Also you could say something like "Today, I would like to thank all those incredible people who have helped me become who I am today and show my gratitude through this small essay/or whatever.
Based on Kolhberg's theory and stages, Hanna's ideas show she is on the conventional stage.
<h3>What are the stages in Kolhberg's theory?</h3>
- Pre-conventional: Social rules are followed only because if not there is a negative consequence.
- Conventional: Authorities and social rules are accepted without questioning them.
- Post-conventional: Ethical principles are used to judge whether an action is good or bad.
<h3>What stage is Hannah in?</h3>
Hanna is in the conventional stage because she has already accepted authorities and social rules but she does not question the law.
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<span>"When she wants conditioner, a manicure, or a flat iron for straight hair." is a sentence fragment.</span>
For this question, due to the answers given, this question requires <u>connotation</u> to find the answer. The only answer that really describes what is said on the question is the first one: Race riots took place all over the country, because the word race tells about the racism, and the word <em><u>riot</u></em><u /> has a negative connotation, and in this case, riot means <u><em /></u><em /><em><u>angry</u> protestors,<u /></em> meaning that the sentence describes the anger over racism.<em />
