Hello, I made my edits in bold. :)
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Dear Ms<u>.</u> Parmar, <em>-Error #1: Add a period after "Ms."</em>
I am writing to you to ask for your help!
As you know, keeping up to date with children's health policies is a key part of my role as an apprentice nursery nurse<u>.</u><u> </u><u>It</u> is important for me to have access to the policies online whilst I am at work. <em>-Error #2: Change the comma after nurse to a period, and capitalize "it."</em>
Unfortunately, due to an IT fault, my workplace access to the <u>I</u>nternet is blocked at the moment. <em>-Error #3: Capitalize "Internet."</em>
I would be grateful if you could look into this as soon as possible<u>.</u> <em>-Error #4: Change the question mark after "possible" to a period.</em>
It is preventing me from doing my job properly, and I worry that I will fall behind in my placement if it continues for much longer. <em>-Error #5: Add a space in between "my" and "job."</em>
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I look forward to hearing from you!
Kind regards,
Charlotte
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