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This is really good!!
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I really enjoyed your writing and I like how you have set this story up!! The story is extremely intriguing and I almost didn't want to stop reading. I love your descriptive language and it makes the story feel alive. The scenarios feel real and its easy to put yourself in the place of Winter (who is an interesting character) and feel sorry for her and her situation. The one thing I think that could help this even more is maybe some even more descriptive words when describing her running away from Cain (she heard every leaf crunch under her feet and cringed at the thought of him hearing her, she felt the cold breeze and stiff air more than ever alone in that tree and she sat in the short amount of safety that was given to her in that moment, she heard Cains manic laugh echo through the forest, ect.). I feel as though this could make that scene even more better than it already is!! :)
I love this idea and your creativity! Keep writing, this will be amazing!!
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Reading literature enables us to see the world through the eyes of others. It trains the mind to be flexible, to comprehend other points of view—to set aside one's personal perspectives to see life through the eyes of someone who is of another age, class, or race.
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In paragraph 114 of the Monkey Paw, Mrs. White told Mr. White to get the Monkey Paw and make a second wish. Mr. White wisely told her that the first wish was only a coincidence and the damage done was already enough.
Mrs. White was excited, feverish, and panting at the possibility of seeing her boy come back to life again. She insisted on having her way.
In the story, Monkey Paw, we learn of Mr. and Mrs. White who were visited by their soldier friend, Morris. He gave them a Monkey Paw from India that he said possessed the ability to grant their wishes.
He, however, warned them of the possible harmful consequences of using it. The couple wished for money to pay off their mortgage and their wish was granted in exchange for their son's life.
In Paragraph 114, we see Mrs. White excitedly thinking of making her son come back alive again with a second wish. Her husband wisely kicked against this.
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