To fix the sentence, change "," after 2004 to ";" and remove the "and" before scientists. It makes the sentence sound better.
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Answer:
The dancer doesn't want to dance in the traditional way
Explanation:
If you are looking for a spell correction here it is
Why does Mr.Darcy not dance at the ball ?
Thanks for reminding us, even if incompletely.
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Answer:
the first person point of view
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