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I would change "Martin's and his family" to "Martin and his family's" and "his family" doesn't need to be in parentheses.
I would change the first commentary sectence to "Martin's Grandfather speaks in sioux which is his native language." and go into futher explanation on what he "knows". It's kind of a cliff hanger.
For the second commentary sentence, you should make sure to mention who's grandfather you're talking about if they are multiple in the story. Also I would change the sentence to "The grandfather exhibits his culture while wearing traditional clothing. The traditional clothing is typically worn by people of his tribe."
For the last commentary sentence, I would change it to "The quote states that the males in the family still follow traditions because it will eventually be passed down through generations.
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According to TeacherVision, analogies can be used to introduce new vocabulary or compare situations or characters in literature. Research shows connecting what children already know to new concepts and ideas sharpens their focus and deepens their understanding.
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It’s either 2 or 3 depending on context. I would go with 2 if the capital A is an accident, if not it’s definitely 3