Question

Help, please! And Asap

Answer 1

It’s great! Good job I mean you could add like what’s ur school called and like how you travel to school, car, cycle, or bus or maybe like what’s in your school and like the subjects you learn or like. Or you can just leave it like that good job I think it’s great!

Answer 2

Answer:

Well done!  No grammatical errors.

However, you are mixing tenses:

iras (future)

tourne (imperative)

prends (present)

continueras (future)

It is still very understandable and perhaps provide a variation.

If you want, you could simply use the present tense, and perhaps use "je" instead of "tu", because you are presenting "mon école" and this is what you do when you go to school.