Use the editing skills you’ve gained to edit your original narrative. In the space provided, list the edits you made to your nar
rative in the following areas: punctuation
sentence structure
active and passive voice
Provide at least five examples of the sentences you edited.
please help me !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
this is my article One day I was on the side of the street and a man needed some cash for some food, I had a little extra cashed saved over, so I proceeded to hand him a tip. He politely thanked me and shook my hand. I went on for the rest of my day feeling great, I made someone's day, I helped them. My friends and family always describe me as a very outgoing, nice, helping character. And I felt like that day really showed.
When I went home I told my mother and the look on her face was spectacular, she was so surprised. She was smiling, and she even gave me a treat after. Later that evening I rememberd the guy that I helped that morning. I guess i'm a pretty nice person after all!
The best revision is: "I am interested in drawing, painting, and making sculptures". You have to edit "make" into "making" as all the other actions in the sentence are verbs.
