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Basile [38]
3 years ago
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Use the editing skills you’ve gained to edit your original narrative. In the space provided, list the edits you made to your nar

rative in the following areas:
punctuation

sentence structure

active and passive voice


Provide at least five examples of the sentences you edited.

please help me !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!




this is my article
One day I was on the side of the street and a man needed some cash for some food, I had a little extra cashed saved over, so I proceeded to hand him a tip. He politely thanked me and shook my hand. I went on for the rest of my day feeling great, I made someone's day, I helped them. My friends and family always describe me as a very outgoing, nice, helping character. And I felt like that day really showed.

When I went home I told my mother and the look on her face was spectacular, she was so surprised. She was smiling, and she even gave me a treat after. Later that evening I rememberd the guy that I helped that morning. I guess i'm a pretty nice person after all!
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1 answer:
sesenic [268]3 years ago
7 0

Answer:

And I felt like that day really showed.

Explanation:

I only had one I could fine but your not supposed to start with and, but. Stuff like that get it

rashon
2 years ago
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