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Basile [38]
3 years ago
15

Use the editing skills you’ve gained to edit your original narrative. In the space provided, list the edits you made to your nar

rative in the following areas:
punctuation

sentence structure

active and passive voice


Provide at least five examples of the sentences you edited.

please help me !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!




this is my article
One day I was on the side of the street and a man needed some cash for some food, I had a little extra cashed saved over, so I proceeded to hand him a tip. He politely thanked me and shook my hand. I went on for the rest of my day feeling great, I made someone's day, I helped them. My friends and family always describe me as a very outgoing, nice, helping character. And I felt like that day really showed.

When I went home I told my mother and the look on her face was spectacular, she was so surprised. She was smiling, and she even gave me a treat after. Later that evening I rememberd the guy that I helped that morning. I guess i'm a pretty nice person after all!
English
1 answer:
sesenic [268]3 years ago
7 0

Answer:

And I felt like that day really showed.

Explanation:

I only had one I could fine but your not supposed to start with and, but. Stuff like that get it

rashon
2 years ago
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