<span>As regards the structure of the text, it seems like a monologue. It should be more concise and straight to the point. There is also a lot of repetition of words, which make it more confusing for the reader. I might be a good idea to clarify concepts and to add some stops for the reader to follow it soothly. </span>
It would make sense to say "sew".
A first-person narrator is usually a character in the very story he is telling. For that reason, he can only tell the audience the things he knows, which can be limited or erroneous, or his assumptions, which can be quite biased. ... They lack impartiality since the story being told is influenced by their feelings
D. self hope that helps:)
