I don't see any outstanding flaws with the grammar. So I would say it is correctly written.
For much of Jeannette's childhood, Dad's promise to build the Glass Castle represents both the family's hope and Jeannette's hero worship of Dad, but, as Jeannette grows older, the castle comes to symbolize his broken promises.
Explanation:
I felt fear when I was six, I was afraid I was going to loose my only sister who was about to die of cancer, I was afraid I was going to loose the one who makes me smile always, At my age I felt very lonely without her knowing that she was going to die I cried so hard,I didn't want to leave her in the hospital alone so I hid anther the hospital bed.
Answer:
D
Explanation:
Because he is fixing the main issue and can his son will see he is trying to make up for his failures.
He started as a businessman who sold brooms, so B.
