Answer:
I think that should be the correct order!
Explanation:
It makes sense to me, he went to the park, told his friends about the scary ride and then rode the double-loop roller coaster.
First of all, it's, "What's wrong with this sentence?"
I can't find any grammatical mistakes here in the second sentence, unless 'did' should become 'does'.
Hope this helps,
~Taco
Rising action is when times get tense, so which one would be most scary if you were Mrs.Jones? Not washing a boys face. Not the boy being unable to say thank you. Not Mrs.Jones giving the ten dollars. So it would have to be Mrs.Jones walking home alone at night. Hope this helped!!! :D
Am. It should be if i were