Answer: It’s good so far! I like the examples with Billie Eilish as it has been a struggle for her. For the Social Media section, is there a way you can dig deeper on the internet to find some more evidence? That way with that you’ll be able to use that evidence to impact your writing. If it’s persuasive, you need evidence and elaboration.
It effects small businesses because since they are not essential like giant or target they have to shut down for the safety of the community or the people.
