Answer:
It's great, hon!
Explanation:
I think you could make some grammatical corrections so it flows together better, however! The majority of it is a really long run-on sentence and it's hard to tell apart dialogue from text because of the lack of quotation marks, but I think the writing is great! Your use of diction is really good.
Answer:
I said to him that we go out for a walk.
She pleaded to her classmates that to let her do her sums.
The examiner called out that time was up to stop writing.
My mother said to me that I wait there till she came back.
She said that to be quiet and listen to her words.
Rakesh pleaded with his friend that to lend him his scooter.
The stranger shouted that to be help in God's name for he had no friends there.
He said to them not to disturb him and go about their business.
The teacher said to children to hurry up not to waste time.
The lawyer said that the man to be forgiven his first mistake.
