Answer:
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The Knights
Answer:
Letter to a friend describing my boarding school.
Explanation:
ABC Avenue
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12 May 2018
Dear Jack,
How are you? I hope everything is fine.
I am actually writing to you about your recent letter asking me about my boarding school.
My boarding school is located at the extreme end of the city's premises The campus is huge with a large, sprawling forest around it. But despite the huge premise, life here is boring. We are allowed to go out into town only twice a month, and that too, only for a couple of hours.
The building is majestic, with huge halls and chapels. The sleeping quarters are old and appear scary at night. We are allowed to be up till 10 and it’s lights out. The place is reminiscent of old-school buildings, with all the huge and ancient sculptures. But the ambiance is good for the students.
Please come visit soon.
Your friend
Joe.
The revision which most effectively corrects the faulty parallelism in the above sentence is:
C. The novel is about a woman who is young, poor, and hardworking.
Parallelism is the use of same components, forms or ideas which are the same or are similar in a sentence. It adds rhythm to the sentences and helps in specifying the ideas more because it involves repetition of ideas or words. The repetition of the words in the lines or parallelism makes an idea or argument more specific and clearer.
