It's in all Capitalized Letters. Unless that was to emphasize how urgent it was to not have beverages past the point then the one wrong thing in the sentence is that it's missing an exclamation point because that would be an appropriate emphasis.
Albus was put in Slytherin. The sorting didn't make a bad choice because maybe Albus could raise the Slytherin House liking considering everyone in the Harry Potter world be hating on them. So with a Potter in Slytherin it could help the house.