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option B. The best critique to explain why Henrique should revise the paragraph is that he needs to add some descriptive language to make the story come alive. In literature a commonly used device is the one of descriptive language. Basically, descriptive language is used to create a picture of the scene/character in the reader's mind. Henrique's story is laying the order of events in a logical order but it is lacking the descriptive language that will give details to those events, making the reader to engage with the story line.
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Revising the claim to make it more specific
2nd page
1.I'm to short to see over everyone's heads in a crowd
2.she was way to tired to play tennis
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4.the box was to heavy for him to lift
5.he doesn't write well for a journalist
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sorry I didn't know what to put for 3 and 6
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Supergirl discovered that not only is her friend, Sam, Reign but that her best friend Lena Luthor knew it. It's a troubling discovery, one that series star Melissa Benoist says will bring a lot of challenges for the Girl of Steel and her alter ego, Kara.
But before Supergirl attempts to get through to Sam.she's going to have to deal with Lena. Monday's episode, "Trinity", picks up with the aftermath of the shocking discovery and part of that aftermath will include dealing with her complicated relationship with Lena. While Supergirl has a professional sort of relationship with Lena, she's Kara's best friend. It's a situation that puts Kara in a difficult situation, as Lena is still in the dark about Kara's super heroic identity. It's a situation that puts Kara in a "moral dilemma".
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The correct answer is A because there is no promise that the American people will be the victor but it is something that the American people believe anyway.