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algol [13]
3 years ago
10

Hi i just need someone to check my work. I did an assignment on English Language paper 2 question Q2. I got some feedback from m

y teacher but i don't really understand them.
for the highlighted sentence she said it was unclear????
also she gave me an ebi of what i should do better next time. can you like explain it to me and also help me of how i can apply this to my work to improve it?
thx

English
1 answer:
chubhunter [2.5K]3 years ago
7 0

Answer:

you said "and and"

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